If it can be said in five words, might I suggest that using 87 is overkill?
LIVERMORE, CA and SOUTH PLAINFIELD, NJ–(Marketwire – Sep 7, 2011) – Addressing retailers’ desire to leverage the power and performance of the latest mobile devices to drive transaction efficiencies, improve operational visibility and in-store customer engagement, Epicor Software Corporation, a global leader in business software solutions for manufacturing, distribution, retail and services organizations, and Global Bay Mobile Technologies, a leading provider of next-generation mobile retail software, have partnered to provide retailers running heritage Epicor® software solutions with an innovative and comprehensive suite of mobile retail applications. (MarketWire)
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I read all 87 words but still don’t know what they are announcing? Is it a smartphone app to purchase stuff from a store? Is it a pudding?
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I remember winning in IT client some time ago by running an Epicor press release through a jargonbuster web site. Their score was almost off the charts. It seems things haven’t changed much.
These guys probably don’t breathe in.